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Edith Bow's avatar

Amazing as always. Love this

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M.P. Fitzgerald's avatar

I'm not gonna lie. I'm in a little awe. "Head hopping" is one of those "never do it because..." rules, but it works so well in this piece and it fits the chaotic nature of Nerisse. Like, even when we are in someone else's head with their voice coming out clear through the prose we remain with Nerisse because the structure matches her. Loving it!

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