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Emil Ottoman's avatar

This is a fantastic piece and I want to see what happens next. Nerisse is one of my faves.

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M.P. Fitzgerald's avatar

This entry is top-notch. Goddamn.

Abdiel is a Fⓤ©ⓚing fuck. Fuck that guy.

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Nick Winney's avatar

Picking the grit out of my eyes... excellent stuff Zani

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Zani D's avatar

First time I had ever written anything like this, thank you so much! Parts five and six get relaunched today and tomorrow working up to the release of part 7 on Friday.

This is my not at all nervous face 🙃

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Nick Winney's avatar

It's great. really visceral, visual, disturbing, makes you grimace reading it. its everything that writing should be. I can almost smell the rape scene - It's so wrong and bad and repellent... THAT is horror. and your words absolutely nail it.

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